Opinions on this rap?

Got bored in class,wrote a rap about......idk rly,life I guess. An eye for and eye is a lie,cuz the world would be blind,but the man wouldn't mind cuz I find that they don't care,who's they?they're everywhere,they wear the same clothes and the same hair,they go to the county fair,but its not fair at all,we struggle to get a job at the mall while they control it all,we sit and listen to the bullshit and occasionally throw fits to hopefully change it,but we rarely do,and if so,its like the traveler just stopping through,here one moment,gone the next just focused on checks and not even the negative press,when they make a mess were the ones they affect,and when they get caught they just deny it,government full or liars and yet they keep arresting weed providers,I can't believe it,we should all feel cheated,at least I do,I don't know bout you but im almost through,friday in mr wells class,man I hope this **** goes by fast.